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The Predator
A low growl could be heard; a rumble that came from deep within the predator like a distant storm approaching.
With milky grey eyes like miniature moons, the cat began to prowl stealthily out of the tall grass spying on its prey waiting to attack at the right moment to get its tea and go back home to feed the little cubs.
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